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不要以貌取人:Never judge a book by its cover!

阿杰按:

  托福写作考试有个题目,叫做:You can learn about people by clothes they wear!

 阿杰根据GRE阅读强化和新概念四册文章的架构,按照上面托福考试的题目,写了下面这篇文章,供大家参考!

文笔拙劣,不揣浅薄,望各位朋友斧正、指教!

主要是抛砖引玉,给大家提供一个托福和GRE写作结构的思考方向

此外,阅读文章可以从写作的角度去思考、学习,写作的文章则反其道而行之,会有新的启发!

(转载请注明出处,谢谢!)

Sages have been chattering all the time about the danger and devastation of judging a book by its cover. Admittedly, there is some truth in their effort, as it would be unsophisticated and misleading to calculate one’s moral character and dignity solely by his “cover”, be it his look, stature or even the quality of clothing.(如果字数多了,这个蓝色部分可以删掉) A closer study of the issue, aided by an acute sense of customs and convictions, (如果字数多了,这个蓝色部分可以删掉) however, reveals quite indisputably that one can learn, more or less, about people by the clothes they dress. The most significant information thus gathered is personal identity and cultural inclinations.

 

Coming first to indicate the affinity between the people and their clothing is the identity issue, which serves as a solid, identifiable evidence to my argument. (如果字数多了,这个蓝色部分可以删掉) With different styles of dressing, one intends to articulate his own identity, thus conveying some cultural subtleties, say, his likes and dislikes, his convictions and taboos. The example of Hippies and Yuppies comes readily to one’s mind. Their unconventional, rebellious dressing code, in a non-verbal manner, remained their counter-cultural manifesto. It is also true in the case of politicians and business people, whose clothing undoubtedly helps to differentiate them from those with different pursuits and occupations.

 

With one’s dress, a sensitive, well-informed mind could also gather crucial information about the customs, beliefs and other cultural inclinations of the community the person lives in, though, in some casesthe knowledge thus gained might be insufficient, but certainly not dismissible. (如果字数多了,这个蓝色部分可以删掉)As we are invariably conditioned by our customs upon the very moment of our birth, we grow up to be little creatures of our communities and convictions. Their beliefs are our belief, their impossibilities our impossibilities. (如果字数多了,这个蓝色部分可以删掉).  Quite understandably, personal clothes, as an important ingredient of its cultural ambience, definitely speak with a tangible, visible language. The only difference is whether the “reader” is aware of this cultural cue or not. But it is forever out there: substantial, stubborn, and speaking!

 

Not surprisingly, it can thus be concluded that one’s clothing does betray, knowingly or unknowingly, something from within, as a thermometer to the temperature. This, however, does not suggest that one’s knowledge should stop here with his friend’s clothing. Instead, a perceptive and reasonable mind forever knows how to explore more, but always by starting with proper knowledge and orientation from what they dress!

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  • 为什么不是我写出来的?
  • 2008-6-2 18:50:24
  • quote 5.Sydney
  • 很不错的文章,李老师爱用抽象名词和副词的风格真是一点没变哦!
  • 2008-6-10 15:20:05
  • quote 6.Sydney
  • 很不错的文章,很值得学习借鉴,李老师善用抽象名词和副词的风格真是一点没变哦!
  • 2008-6-10 15:20:43
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  • http://blog.sina.com.cn/azhu2006
  • 杰哥,我转载了
    写的好,我也跟别人说过这个观点。
    特别是?Not surprisingly, it can thus be concluded that one’s clothing does betray, knowingly or unknowingly, something from within, as a thermometer to the temperature. This, however, does not suggest that one’s knowledge should stop here with his friend’s clothing. Instead, a perceptive and reasonable mind forever knows how to explore more, but always by starting with proper knowledge and orientation from what they dress!
  • 2008-7-3 23:11:41
  • quote 9.cotton
  • 李老师的文章很有深度,但是这篇当中似乎有些诡辩的成分,但是这篇“诡辩”的肌理似乎在于生活哲学上而不是像亚里士多德《修辞学》当中对于辩论本身的一种辞令延伸,当然词汇上我是彻底折服,这也充分说明老师对英美文字和文化上的力透纸背,但我想说的是“披着羊皮的狼”这句话我曾经在Economist上看到过更经典的表述,那种表述似乎在雅的修辞上更胜一筹,我想老师也能背住i have a dream,在一种必须靠征服性的强势获取高分的GRE考试中,我相信依然可以沿用这篇演讲中的圭臬,即是说音律的气势,似乎胜过近于禅宗的理解,程颐在他的《二程集》中也讲过禅宗的一些缺憾,它的魅力和缺憾恰恰都融在一点上,那就是神秘主义,要想让改卷的老师在心烦意乱中该附有这种思想的文章,我不相信会有好的分数,至少不会是很优秀的分数。以上皆为拙见,希老师不吝赐教!

    Haha阿杰回复说:
    你说的有道理哈!
    很多美妙的东西还是可以同工而异曲的哈!
    阿杰Haha
    由 lijie 于 2008-7-18 18:47:59 最后编辑
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    阿杰回复说:
    谢谢!
    你太过奖了哈!
    阿杰
    由 lijie 于 2008-7-27 22:03:56 最后编辑
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    Haha阿杰回复说“

    所以这才是东方课堂的魅力:你完全可以听到不同的观点,优秀如GRE班的朋友们,肯定会有自己的见解,吸收我和高薇老师的脑花,提升自我哈!

    兼听则明,偏听则暗!

    你说呢?
    阿杰Haha
    由 lijie 于 2008-8-4 16:35:44 最后编辑
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